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There is nothing there, not like before.
This long, slow game will be no more.
Set me free from your hold.
Because I will never be that bold.
©2009 =CSnyder
:iconcsnyder:

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my second poem posted, be nice
scares the hell out of me to post
only fave if it earned it
thank you to :iconrenegade-angel23:
for giving it the once over

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:iconhybridgothica:
short but sweet :heart:

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"For I am kind..."
:iconfevereiro:
Short poems are difficult to write because you need to find the perfect words for each line. I'm not very good at poetry, but I think this is a very nice poem. ^^ Well done!

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:iconsocially-suicidal:
It's simple and nice. Don't be afraid to post :P

I was afraid to post until a few days ago, the number of posts I made in the last 2-3 days is near 50. It just takes a few 'bold' looks and types to be comfortable with it.

You'll find that the more you look at other people's art and comment on it, on top of favoriting what deserves it and watching who deserves it, you'll get more comments on your own work because people will watch you and it's much easier for them to find your work.

Cool and simple though, keep it up and look at others and you'll get some nice poetry :)

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You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

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:icongosia-firewarrior:
:hug:

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"The mystery of life isn't a problem to solve, but a reality to experience."

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:iconcsnyder:
well ive made over 100 thousand comments in a year, its not that
i normalaly dont post lit, to personal
but i really thank you so much, you made my day
:iconcsnyder:
youre right, i try to say little but mean alot, thank you so much my friend
:iconmalicon:
Nice. :nod:

I was wondering though, in the third line is says

'Set me free from you hold'

Do you mean to say 'your' there? Or did you mean to say 'you'? Just wondering. :)

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I am Yellow Kirby in ~TheSSBBCrew
I am Aravis in ~NarniaFanClub
I am Noctis in ~The-KH-and-FF-Family

"I am your father's brother's nephew's cousin's former room mate."
"So what does that make us?"
"Absolutely nothing!"
:iconcsnyder:
yes...lol
thank you hun

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